You're really nice, and you're easy to talk to ooc, but on an ic level it's difficult to tag with you. I find that your tags tend to be very flat and lacking in hooks/catches/points of interest, and it usually leaves me floundering for something to actually reply to. Even when there's something going on in your tags, it's not the kind of thing that my character can really react to. It's just... there, and I often feel like I'm the one carrying the situation. Unfortunately this is a large reason why I've dropped many threads with Feldt.
While I'm not canon familiar, I find Feldt to be rather flat. I'm not sure I'd be able to describe her even after threading with her multiple times besides 'dull and kind of nice.' I'd suggest taking a look at her canon and trying to pick out what particular personality ticks make her who she is and playing them up a little more ic, just to give a bit more variety and life to her. More introspection into Feldt's thoughts/feelings would probably also help give more dimension to her. I'd also suggest taking more risks with Feldt. I find she plays a very passive role in all of the interactions I've had with her--perhaps having her be a little more aggressive/having her be the one to make moves/etc would help.
Please don't take this as a sign I don't want to play with you! I look forward to our CR and future plotting.
Thanks for this. I've been thinking about the way I've been playing her for a while now and I've come to the conclusion that I need another canon review. I know that we've just got a few things started, but I think I'm going to put Feldt on Hiatus for a couple of weeks as I try to review and hopefully play her better.
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Date: 2013-03-18 10:47 pm (UTC)While I'm not canon familiar, I find Feldt to be rather flat. I'm not sure I'd be able to describe her even after threading with her multiple times besides 'dull and kind of nice.' I'd suggest taking a look at her canon and trying to pick out what particular personality ticks make her who she is and playing them up a little more ic, just to give a bit more variety and life to her. More introspection into Feldt's thoughts/feelings would probably also help give more dimension to her. I'd also suggest taking more risks with Feldt. I find she plays a very passive role in all of the interactions I've had with her--perhaps having her be a little more aggressive/having her be the one to make moves/etc would help.
Please don't take this as a sign I don't want to play with you! I look forward to our CR and future plotting.
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Date: 2013-03-19 01:29 am (UTC)